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Most adults believe that modern children (5-10 years old) behave worse than those in the past. What action parents should take do you think will have the most positive effect on children to help them be have better like respecting and treating others kindly?

¡¡¡¡1) limit the types of the TV programs and movies they watch

¡¡¡¡2) spend more time talking with children

¡¡¡¡3) supervise and monitor children while they are playing with their friends


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±Ç±âÇö 18-08-28 18:22
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To begin with, it is important for parents to spend more time talking with children because
     
±Ç±âÇö 18-08-29 01:07
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To begin with, it is important for parents to talk with children because children can look back what they do during talking. As long as children look back, they correct their behavior. To correct behavior, spending more time talking with children is crucial for parents.

In addition, there is no better choice for parents other than talking with children because children learn the significance of family through talking. As long as children realize the importance of family, they increasingly put their family first. Regarding putting their family first, talking with children is the best option out of all of the choices.
Á¶¿¹ºó 18-08-28 18:23
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To begin with, It is better to supervise and monitor children because
°­½Åö 18-08-28 18:23
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To begin with, children should watch limited the types of TV programs and movie because

children can be negatively affected by tv programs.
     
°­½Åö 18-08-29 20:09
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To begin with, children should watch limited the types of TV programs because children have less ability to judge what is correct. As long as children lack judgement ability, children can learn all actions from TV programs. To block children learning worse behavior, watching limited the types of TV programs is crucial for children.

In addition, it is important for children to watch limited the types of TV programs because children can relieve stress which children behave worse by watching TV. In that stress makes children behave worse, children need to have time to relieve stress. As children can alleviate their stress watching TV programs, children should watch TV programs.
ÁÖ¼­¿¬ 18-08-28 18:23
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To begin with, adults should spend more time talking with (their) children because parents can teach thier(their) children how to behave appropriately. Since interacting with children will convince them to behave appropriately, C»ý°¢ÇϼžßÇØ¿ä
     
ÁÖ¼­¿¬ 18-08-29 13:54
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To begin with, adults should spend more time talking with their children because parents can teach their children how to behave appropriately. Since interacting with children will convince them to behave appropriately, children will respect others. As children treat others kindly, parents should talk with their children.

In addition, it is crucial for parent to spend more time talking with their children because children will learn to respect their parents. In that children will be able to respect their parents, they will follow their parents. To make the children obey their parents, it is important for the children to talk with their parents.
ż­¿¬ 18-08-28 18:24
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To begin with, it is important to spend more time talking with children for parents because parents can offer advice to children what(on how) they should behave. In that parents are wise enough to offer sincere advice,
ÇÑ¿ø¼® 18-08-28 18:26
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to begin with, it is important for parents to monitor children because



 parents can prevent their children from becoming worse by supervising. As long as parents prevent their children from being worse, children would be kind and respecting. To make children kind and respecting it is important for parents to supervise and monitor children.

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ÇÑ¿ø¼® 18-08-29 01:23
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To begin with, it is important for parents to spend more time because they can talk their children their bad behaviors. As long as children are told their bad behaviors, children are prevented from doing any wrong, bad, behaviors. To prevent children from becoming wrong, it is important for parents to spend more time talking with children.

In addition, spending more time is crucial for parents because children can learn a kind and respecting way of speaking by kindly communicating to each other. In that children can communicate to their parents with a lot of time, children can become respecting and treating. To make children respecting and treating, spending more time is crucial for parents..
±èÁö¼ö 18-08-28 18:29
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To begin with, it is important to spend more time talking with children because
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±èÁö¼ö 18-08-29 13:41
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To begin with, it is important to spend more time talking with children because parents is the one who care most about their children. In that parents know their children well, they can give advice about their children's behavior. Since parents can give helpful advice to their children, talking with children have the most positive effect on children.

In addition, talking with children is crucial because it can make good memory for children. As long as students can have good memory through talking with the parents, good advice have long lasting effect on the children.
As parent's advice have long lasting effect on the children, talking is crucial for children's good behavior.
 
 

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