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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to help with household tasks as long as they grow old enough to do so. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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±Ç±âÇö 18-08-29 18:57
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To begin with, it is important for children to not require to help because they cannot learn independence. As long as their independence is not learned, They do not anything themselves. To doing themselves, not requiring to help is crucial for children. For example, when I was a little child, I did homework on a daily basis without helping from my parent because they wanted to do my homework myself. By doing so, I became gradually independent. As a result, I could independence on a daily basis.
°­½Åö 18-08-29 18:59
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To begin with, children should be required to help with household tasks because working together with children can save time. As long as children save time by working together, saving time means children can do more things for their interests. To have more time for their interest, children should be required to help with household tasks. For example, when I was a 6 years old, I spent much time to clean my room. My room was so big for me to clean up myself. For this reason, I did not have times to play with my friends. Finally, I required my mother help with me. Since I saved my time to clean my room, I got times to play with friends. It had such a huge influence on me that I believe children should be required to help with household tasks.
±èÁö¼ö 18-08-29 19:01
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To begin with, it is important for children to help with household tasks because children can learn importance of division of labor. As long as they learn division of labor, they can be useful in modern society. To be a useful people, children should help with household tasks. For example, when I was a little child, I did not like household tasks. In that I do not like this, my mother did not ask me to do household tasks. As I grew up, I did not learn how to wok with other people. I had hard time doing work with others for long time. The example clearly illustrates that it is important for children to be required to help with household tasks.
Á¶¿¹ºó 18-08-29 19:01
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It is better for children not to help with household task because their academic courses are more important than household task. as long as their academic courses are more important than household,household hinder children to concentrate on their academic courses. since household task hinder children to concentrate on their academic courses, It is important for children not to help with house hold task. For example, When I was a little child, I had to help with household task. because household task was stressful for me, household task hinder me to concentrate on academic courses. It had such a huge influence on me that it is crucial for children not to help with household task
ż­¿¬ 18-08-29 19:01
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To begin with, It is important to help with household tasks to me because family is my number 1-priority. In that the family is my number 1-priority, my mother do the household task diligently for me . To help my mother even now, I have to help with household tasks.
ÇÑ¿ø¼® 18-08-29 20:04
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To begin with, it is not important for children to be required to help with household because not being required to help with household, children can save their time. In that children can save their time, they can do a lot things more. To do a lot things more, it is not important for children to be required to help with household. For example, when I was a little child, I did not have enough time to play basketball because I had to help with household. However, I stopped helping with household, and since then, I could have enough time to play basketball.
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We are born into complex and demanding world, so it is necessary to be prepared for the responsibilities and obligations of life from childhood to adulthood. From my perspective, one way to prepare children for the future is to assign household tasks to them. I will elaborate on the reasons which my view is based on in the following easay. First of all, children need to learn about responsibilities, but also they teach them about discipline and importance of responsibilities. For example, when I was little, I had to make breakfast for the entire family so I got used to getting up early in the morning even on weekends. Doing such routine tasks as a child made me a more independent and self-confident person.
 
 

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