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³²»çÇö 20-03-09 16:47
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When I was young, I played game a lot.
Because I do not study well, now I'm preparing to American À¯ÇÐ.
If I do not have money, I would give up to go America.
À±¹ÌÁø 20-03-09 16:47
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When i was little, i was short.

Because of that i had a trauma. So i have worked out a lot.

If i didn't do it, i couldn't be tall like this.
ÀÌÀ±°æ 20-03-09 16:47
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When I was young about 7 years old, I wanted to have a grand piano and said to my mom about that.
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Because I didn't want to study Mathematics, I failed in that.
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If I didn't go university, I would work for maintenance.
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ÀåÇؼö 20-03-09 16:47
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When I was child i learned the piano.
Because I like musical, I play the piano.
If I have no money, I cannot play the piano.
ÀÓ¿¹¿ø 20-03-09 16:47
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Because I wasn't good at English, I started to study it.
When I was young, I played a violin.
If I didn't have a phone, I couldn't call you.
±èº´°Ç 20-03-09 16:47
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1. I would like to travel other countries when I was childhood.

2. Because I have to go graduated school, I must have to study TOFEL.

3. If I didn't have purpose of study, I couldn' study TOFEL.
À¯ÇÏ¿¬ 20-03-09 16:47
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When I was an elementary student, i usually went to a park near my house.

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I went to a department store because I had to buy a pancel.

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If there were a pencil, I would write a diary.

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ÃÖ°¡¶÷ 20-03-09 16:47
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When I was a child, I liked movie.
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Because I liked movie, I often go to the thearter.
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If i have no money, I can't go to the thearter.
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±è½Â¹Î 20-03-09 16:48
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When i was 4 years old, I  first started riding a bike.
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Because I really wanted to exercise, I started riding a bike that had 4 Wheels.
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If I didn't have any ability of althletic, I wouldn't have ridden a bike when I was young.
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¹æ¼®ÁÖ 20-03-09 16:48
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When I was young, I learned swimming.
Because I want to go America school, I should learn English.
If I had no phone, I could not keep in touch with anyone.
±è½Ã¿¬ 20-03-09 16:48
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When i was young, i usually played with my brother.

Because i have a son, i work hard more than he did.

If we have no water, we cannot survive.
±èÇÏ¿µ 20-03-09 16:48
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When I was young, I had many dreams.

Because he was sick, I was sad.

If you were not busy, you would contact me.
ÀÌÁöÀÎ 20-03-09 16:48
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When I was young, I entered piano academy near my house.
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Because I have more money, I can have a good phone.

If you study more harder, you have a good grades.
±è¿¹Áø 20-03-09 16:49
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When I was young, I hit my friends.
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Because I didn't have breakfast, I am extremely hungry now.
³»°¡ ¾ÆħÀ» ¾È ¸Ô¾ú±â ¶§¹®¿¡ ³ª´Â Áö±Ý ±Øµµ·Î ¹è°¡ °íÇÁ´Ù.

If I don't have a phone, I couldn't call to my friend.
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±è¿¹Áø 20-03-09 17:03
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When I was young, I hit my friends.
³»°¡ ¾î·ÈÀ» ¶§ ³ª´Â ³» Ä£±¸¸¦ ¶§·È´Ù.

Because I did not have breakfast, I am extremely hungry now.
³»°¡ ¾ÆħÀ» ¾È ¸Ô¾ú±â ¶§¹®¿¡ ³ª´Â Áö±Ý ±Øµµ·Î ¹è°¡ °íÇÁ´Ù.

If I do not have a phone, I could not call to my friend.
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±èµ¿Çö 20-03-09 16:49
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when
when i was young, I played the game
because
because l don't like pizza, l am fat
if
if a person have no car , a person do not go to the school
ÃÖ¼±¿ì 20-03-09 16:50
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When I was young, I watched NFL. After I watched I fall into football.
My favorite NFL Team is Seatle Seahawks because the QB was so powerful and the team won the game.
If
À¯´ÉÇÑ 20-03-09 16:50
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when I was child, I could not eat Kimchi ³»°¡ ¾î·ÈÀ»¶§ ³ª´Â ±èÄ¡¸¦ ¸ÔÁö ¸øÇß´Ù
Because I want to study in America, I begin to study English ¹Ì±¹¿¡¼­ °øºÎÇÏ°í ½Í±â ¶§¹®¿¡ ³ª´Â ¿µ¾î°øºÎ¸¦ ½ÃÀÛÇß´Ù
If I did not have a pencil, I could not take test.¸¸ÀÏ ¿¬ÇÊÀÌ ¾ø´Ù¸é ³ª´Â ½ÃÇèÀ» Ä¥¼ö ¾ø¾ú´Ù
±èÀº½É 20-03-09 16:50
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When I was young, I had an accident of swimming in the pool.
 

Because I had the horrible experience, I did not go any places like sea and river in spite of safe swimming pool.


If it is not occurred, I will be a healthy and active person.
¾çÈñÂù 20-03-09 16:51
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When i was a little boy I fell down during riding a bike.

I was late because a car crash came out in front of me.

If their team won the game, everyone would be happy.
À¯À 20-03-09 16:52
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when i was child back in China, I used to join to some community club to study chinese. Because i could learn more and more knowledge and social skills in chinese also i could make many friends at there. for example, if i had some questions about how to make well relationship with chinese friends, i could ask them, at this process i could ....
ÁÖ¼­Á¤ 20-03-09 16:52
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When ¾î¸°½ÃÀý ~¸¦ Çß´Ù
—> When I was young, I read many books.
Because ±× ~¶§¹®¿¡ ~ÇÏ°Ô µÇ¾ú´Ù
—> Because there were not enough books, I could not study perfectly. 
If ¸¸¾à ~°¡ ¾ø¾úÀ¸¸é ~ÇÏÁö ¸ø ÇßÀ» °ÍÀÌ´Ù
—> If there was not my dog, I could not be happy.
Á¤¼ºÈÖ 20-03-09 16:55
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When I was young, I used to play the computer game.


Because I played game a lot, I did not study last weekend.


If I studied last weekend, I could get more score.
Á¶È­¿µ 20-03-09 17:01
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Because I am studied in Usher academy, My English skill will be prove.

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When I was young, I studied Art.

¸¸¾à ¾ö¸¶°¡ ¾ø¾ú´Ù¸é °Ç°­ÇÏÁö ¸øÇßÀ» °ÍÀÌ´Ù.
If I had not have mom, I would be unhealthy.
³²½ÂÇõ 20-03-09 17:02
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when i was young, i want to be a violinist
because i watched the violinst's play,i was happy
if i have no money,i do not play violin
¾çÈñÂù 20-03-09 17:03
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When I was a little boy, I fell down during riding a bike.

I was late, because a car crash came out in front of me.

If their team won the game, everyone would be happy.
õÁö¿ø 20-03-09 17:09
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When I was young, i got a piano lesson from new teacher
because i like to play the piano, my mom bought me piano
if i didn't meet a piano teacher, i could't go on piano until now
 
 

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