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[E-3차특강] 20170801 E 김민정 수업정리
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#5 첨삭 P.148
-s 까먹지 Ⅹ
-내용
-if I were on the man’s shoes
-날짜 앞에 the 붙이기 Ⅹ
-상세하게 다 설명해주기
#독립형
What is the important experience of your life that changed your view or behavior?
If I were to answer the question, I would say that the important experience of my life was living in Japan. The reasons for this question is that I was able to change my perspective of the world. Before moving to Japan, I thought that Korea is the best country all over the world and also the place to live comfortably. However, my view was changed abruptly after living in Japan. While dwelling in Japan, I realize that Korea is not the only country that is easy to live.
What advice for a friend considering a year off before entering university?
If I were to answer the question, I would say to my friend who is considering a year off before entering university that he or she has to do her major study. He or she assures that entering a university. If they study about their major subject before they really study at the university, they will clearly able to get a good score at the test. For instance, my brother had some difficulties at learning his major by not pre-learning. That’s why I suggest to study for his or her major before entering university.
*예시를 얘기할 때, 누구의 예시를 들지 말고, 근거를 조금 더 충분히 하거나 반대의 예시를 들자
*논리에 맞추어서 이야기하자
*생각을 줄이는 연습을 하자
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