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1. Playing sports encourages students to be more aggressive when they become adults.
- I disagree with the statement that (주제) and there are two reasons for this.
To begin with, students can get ability to cooperate with others. They play hard to achieve the same goal with other members which is winning the game. Through this process, the students can learn the team work and be mature.
Second, they can easily make friends by exercising. If they make friends, they are able to get peace and be mild. Therefore, they are not likely to be aggressive and learn how to socialize.
@피드백 : 논리 부족, aggressive 반박하는 내용이 적다, adult 되었을 때의 내용 x
2. The success of a school depends on experienced teachers.
- I disagree with the statement that (주제) and there are two reasons for this.
To begin with, there are other ways to make a school success. For instance, the quality of facilities such as library and cafeteria can make a school be successful. It is because the education is not the best factor to make a school success. Second, not all experienced teachers teach well. For example, my math teachers has a lot of experience. However, most students complain because her teaching style is really boring.
@피드백 : 너무 급하게 마무리 지음, 예시 내용 부족
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