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1.In my view, I think it is better to choose teaching children among others. There are many reasons but here are couple. First, I love to teach children. When I vistied my relatives, I taught my four years old cousin how to write down Korean word. He learned very fast I felt and I felt a sense of achievement. Second, I can forget about everything related to company. I just played the ball with my cousin last Saturday and all my worries had gone. Theses are the reasons why I do much prefer teaching children.

2.I were to ask the question, I would say going to a picnic is the best. There are many reasons but here are couple. First I can expreince different evnrionment out of city life. My family love to go to mountain or beach which hardly exist in the middle of city. By seeing enourmous trees and taking fresh air, I can be relaxed out of work. Also, a picninc can strenghten family bond. Last saturday, our family had barbeque and played the ball together and could have a good memory. THere are the reasons why I love to go picnic.

3.Im view, I think it is better to study than working. There are many reaosns but here are couple. First, I can get a higher score than other competitors by studying more. Actually, I have to get higer score in English to get addmission from graduate school. So, I would like to enhance my Enghlish ability rather than working. Second, I can feel a sense of achievement. Last Saturday, I wrote down more than ten eassay on that day and I felt great since I felt my writing ability had improved.


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