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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ?

Playing sports encourages students to be more aggressive when they become adult.

I disagree with the statement that playing sports encourages students to be more aggressive when they become adult for two reasons.

First, playing ports will help people relieve stress. It is the biggest obstacle that keep people away from being healthy and relaxed. However, by relieving stress through playing sports, students will be less aggressive and be more relaxed. For example, when the student become an adult, they will play sports as a hobby, which the enjoy and like the most. This will be the direct step for them to relieve stress and be more relaxed.

Second, students will be more mature by playing sports. They will learn how to cooperate with others, which is the most important factor in human lives and the direct key to the success by playing sports. Further, they will also learn how to deal with people and understand their ideas, which will make them much more open-minded and mature. For instance, by playing group sports, such as soccer, the student will learn how to work with their teammate in order to win the game. They need to overcome all the difficulties together as a team. In this case, the students will cherish each member, which will make them less aggressive but more mature.

That's why I disagree with the statement that playing sports encourages students to be more aggressive when they become adult.


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