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To be born by people's needs, shoes can only come to the end of the life when they are no longer needed. Shoes are cleaned at first, but it starts to wear out as time goes by, and starts to take a form of their owner's feet. shoes are affected by many factors like people's walking habits and exercising amounts. Like how shoes are changed by owners' characteristics, opinions can also be different from the way people live their lives. People have a variety of opinions for this topic but I have mine that indicates the way I lived my life. I will provide two reasons to prove my perspective. First, ____. Second, _____.

As shoes wear out as they give help, my logic of __ÀÌÀ¯1__ and __ÀÌÀ¯2__ was used to help finish the essay about the topic _____________________. After justifiable rational, the essay is finished.


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To be born by people's needs, shoes can only come to the end of the life when they are no longer needed. Shoes are cleaned at first, but it starts to wear out as time goes by and starts to take a form of their owner's feet. Shoes are affected by many factors like people's walking habits and exercising amounts. Like how shoes are changed by owners' characteristics, opinions can also be different from the way people live their lives. People have a variety of opinions on this topic but I have mine that indicates the way I lived my life. I will provide two reasons to prove my perspective. First, ____. Second, _____.

As shoes wear out as they give help, my logic of __ÀÌÀ¯1__ and __ÀÌÀ¯2__ was used to help finish the essay about the topic _____________________. After justifiable rationale, the essay is finished.
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 183.¢½.53.158  
To be born by people's needs, shoes can only come to the end of the life when they are no longer needed. Shoes are clean at first, but it starts to wear out as time goes by and starts to take a form of their owner's feet. Shoes are affected by many factors like people's walking habits and exercising amounts. Like how shoes are changed by owners' characteristics, opinions can also be different from the way people live their lives. People have a variety of opinions on this topic but I have mine that indicates the way I lived my life. I will provide two reasons to prove my perspective. First, ____. Second, _____.

As shoes wear out as they give help, my logic of __ÀÌÀ¯1__ and __ÀÌÀ¯2__ was used to help finish the essay about the topic _____________________. After justifiable rationale, the essay is finished.
 
 

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