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[K-Usher1] 20171129 K1 김수민 수업정리
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7. In order to succeed, it is better to be like others rather than different from everybody else.
Disagree
- Easier to stand out among people
 In the modern days, the society is more competitive than it was before. Therefore, in order to survive from the competition, it is important to stand out to be selected, or elected.
 Back in middle school, I used to have a very unique friend. She did not like to compromise to the norms of the society; she avoided doing what all the others do, and essentially did what she wanted to do even if it was different from the others. => This kind of characteristic also helped her to excel others in her field of major. She is currently majoring in medicine in Hong Kong. Even though she is a foreigner in her university, she is working with her professor for his new project. This is mainly because the way she thinks is different from that of others.
- Widens the perspective
 Thinking differently widens the perspective which is crucial for the success in contemporary times. Thesedays, multinational companies and even universities are looking for students who are open-minded rather than those with fixed perspective such as stereotypes.
 When people strive to become a part of the society, they have to accept the fixed norms of the society. However, because the ideals and ideas are already fixed through the culture and the history of the society, this traps people to think within a small range.
 For example, people these days are usually trapped in the idea of “the standard of beauty”, which is a prevalent stereotype.


  8. Some people always follow their dreams even if the dreams are ambitious. Some think we should focus on achieving realistic goals. Which do you agree with?
- Should focus on achieving realistic goals
 Do not need to waste time on meaningless activities
 Can live a satisfying life without much stress

  9. A challenging and interesting job is better than a job with long vacations.
- A challenging and interesting job is better
 A challenging and interesting job gives opportunities for self-improvement
  A challenging job enables me to push myself to a more advanced level of work compared to that of what I've been working. Through this, I will be able to identify what I am and I am not capable of. For the elements that I am capable of, I can build upon the skill.
 People tend to slack off when they get jobs with long vacations
- When I had long vacations, I wasted too much time on meaningless activities such as watching TV  and drinking with friends.

  10. It is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than save money for the future.
- Money on traveling and vacation
 Relieves stress
 Traveling and vacation can provide a getaway from the mundane life
 My sister, who now works at a company, has always advised me to spend as much as money on travels when I have time to do so. She said as she grew older, she did not even have the time for travels while travels always gave her a positive motivation to live a life even when she was very stressed out. Just  by looking up at the photos from last travels, she was able to come back to a positive state of mind.
 Saving money for the future incurs the overall loss in the value of money.
 Although some might argue saving money for the future decreases the risk to lose money, saving money in a bank can be dangerous.
 The exchange rate and interest rate of saved money varies every day because they are dependent on the value of money. Value of money of money rises and falls depending on the value of money in other countries. By not using money when the exchange rate is low, in other words, when the value of money is high, this incurs the loss.
  11. People spend too much money on their pets even though there can be other good ways to spend money.
- disagree
- can learn a sense of responsibility
- my friend, who was the only child in her family, was able to learn a sense of responsibility by raising a dog. Because she was the only one who could take care of her pet, she had to keep her eyes on her dog so that she could feed and wash the pet. One day, she came back home, exhausted from the work. Therefore, she was not able to feed the pet for two days. Later she found out that the immune system of the pet has been weakened, and the pet has been sick for days. From this experience she was able to learn a sense of responsibility
- can understand the importance of life.
- pets are living organisms. They are composed of cells, have metabolism and reproduce to leave their youngs and continue their generations. By spending money on their pets, pet owners can directly learn and understand the importance of life.
- pet owners can observe how organisms react to certain stimulus
12. When people spend a lot of time watching sports on television or following their favorite team, it has negative effects on their lives.
- Watching sports game can be detrimental to health.
- It is not hard to find people who end up in an emergency room in the middle of watching television. This has been proven scientifically.
- When people watch intense sports game, their blood pressure increases. Increase in the blood pressure,in other words, means that the heart is beating fast. However, because the body is not moving, the huge amount of blood pumping out from the heart is only used to extensively stretch the blood vessels.
- waste too much time when they can spend time on other better activities
- Sports game can be extremely long
- baseball, for example, can take as much as five or six hours
- When I was in middle school, because I was a big fan of a baseball team Samsung Lions, I watched their baseball game every day. However, the problem was that I could not stop watching the games even on my mid-term exam periods.


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김채운 17-11-30 10:12
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7-1 in the modern days ->현대에서는 인데 modern days가 사실 오늘날을 더이상 얘기하지 않고 과거를 얘기합니다. modern을 contemporary로 바꿔서 얘기해야합니다. 그러면 days를 못쓰겠죠!  내용이 성공이랑 상관이 없습니다. 골라지면 뽑히면 성공이랑 연광성이 있느거냐? 전혀 그렇지 않습니다! 성공이랑 주제에 대한 언급이 글에서 없습니다.

7-2생각을 다르게 하는것이 어떻게 생각을 넓히는건지에 대한 설명이 없습니다. 그리고 잘 생각해보면 그 사람의 생각이 다르다고 해서 관점이 넓다는 의미가 아닌것을 바로 눈치 챌수있으실겁니다. 예시 ) 태극집회, 대한민국 다수의 국민과 다른 관점을 갖고 있지만 박근혜를 옹호하는게 더 관점이 넓은건가요?

8-1 왜 글이 없어요?
8-2 마찬가지로?

9-1 글에서myself라는거는 예시에서나 쓰는거구 people can push themselves 가 되는게 낫겠죠?

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