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7. In order to succeed, it is better to be like others rather than different from everybody else.
Be different
a. Having different habits on spending money is essential to succeed. People cannot be richer than others when they do the same behavior like others. Only a thrifty spending lifestyle will lead to financial stability and it will help them to be successful. Therefore, people who are willing to be different from other can be successful financially. <save money »ç¿ë>
b. When I was in university, I did not buy luxury product to save money. Furthermore, I did not played a lot with my friends. When I became graduate student, I was able to buy bicycle I longed for. 
c. Efforts that is different from others to save time is important for people in order to succeed. People are living a busy and hectic life, so having time means we can do a lot of more things later. Many people say that life is not fair, but everyone has 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. With the equally given time, people should be eager to save their time in order to succeed.
d. My father – did paper same amount of work in shorter time than others. – he promoted much faster than others.

8. Some people always follow their dreams even if the dreams are ambitious. Some think we should focus on achieving realistic goals. Which do you agree with?
--- we should focus on achieving realistic goals
a-b People should focus on achieving realistic goals because it is the way to prevent being stressed out.
b-c Stress is known to be a major factor that keeps us from being healthy, and many people are suffering from various problems.
c-a This is more serious than we think, therefore people should focus on achieving realistic goals not to be stressed out.
Ex
a-b It is the best way to save time because achieving realistic goal involves not many failures.
b-c Less chances of failure means that people can reach their goals faster than when they follow and achieve their ambitious dreams.
c-a Reaching their goal faster means people can do a lot of more things later.
Ex

9. A challenging and interesting job is better than a job with long vacations.
 job with long vacations
Job with long vacations is better because it is important to spend time with family. Spending time with family is the number-one priority in any occasion. These days, people tend to overlook the importance of family, because we usually spend too much time working or studying. We need to take a break and look back why we¡¯re working or studying in the first place. We go through all these hardships to make our families happier. Wealth and degrees mean nothing if we cannot share them with our families. Therefore, Job with long vacations is better in order to spend time with family.
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It is better to have a job with vacations which is long enough to relieve stress. People nowadays are living a busy and hectic life, so they are under great stress, but a lot of them do not even realize they are stressed out. Stress is known to be a major factor that keeps us from being healthy, and many people are suffering from various problems. This is more serious than we think, and for this reason, it is better to have a job with vacations with long vacation.
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10. It is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than save money for the future.
Save money for the future¡¦
It is better to save money for the future because a thrifty spending habit is indispensable in peoples¡¯ lives. If people do not get used to working on a tight budget, they will always be short on cash later. A penny-pinching lifestyle will lead to financial stability and it will give us peace of mind. For this reason, it is much better to save money for the future.
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