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7. In order to succeed, it is better to be like others rather than different from everybody else.
disagree,  being like other is not better to succeed because developed society require special abilities to people. living being different from everybody will be able to give people a broad perspective.
EX) school - friend, emulate - how to study - not success - company x
      Company - money - other invest in - habit and knowledge - success
 
¡¡¡¡8. Some people always follow their dreams even if the dreams are ambitious. Some think we should focus on achieving realistic goals. Which do you agree with?
      realistic goals, people with ambitious goals will be able to receive stress to achieve dreams because dreams require a lot of efforts to invest in every time and money. 
      Achieving realistic goals can raise a sense of confidence because once tiny success is completed by people¡¯s efforts, people can feel a sense of achievement from tiny success. 
EX) company - boss - dreams - effort - fail - company bankrupt
      School - report 'a' - presentation 'a' - exam 'a' - sat 'a' - success

¡¡¡¡9. A challenging and interesting job is better than a job with long vacations.
    a job with long vacations is better than a challenging and interesting job because long vacation gives people time of self-development.
A challenging and interesting job is not better than a job with long vacations because fluctuated works will limit time to spend with family due to worker¡¯s achievement
Ex) company - other investment x - retire - satisfaction x
    Father - workaholics - family x - salary machine - retire - family not take care 

¡¡¡¡10. It is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than save money for the future.
spending money on traveling and vacation is the best way to relieve stress because traveling is the way to be far away from accustomed life.
Saving money for the future cannot meet people¡¯s desire because saving money take a long time to buy the best somethings and then they continue to save money until they die.
Ex) college - traveling - stress - good memory
    Future invest house or car - house value increase or better car emergence - waiting - elder - die - not buy 

¡¡¡¡11. People spend too much money on their pets even though there can be other good ways to spend money.
people should too much money on their pet because people think of their pet as a member of their family.
Keeping a pet with spending much money is the best way to raise a responsibility of their children or themselves because it need to spend much money taking care of pets such as hospitality, hairdressing
Ex) love dog - grow together- only friend - all invest, but the dog die - sorrow or pain - adopt the other pet
  Raise dog - feed or wash - take care of - responsibility - my children help 

¡¡¡¡12. When people spend a lot of time watching sports on television or following their favorite team, it has negative effects on their lives.
following team is the best way to relieve stress because it is their life.
Spending time with favorite team can make good reminisce in people life because people do not have enough time to make good memory.   
Ex) love soccer team - game seasons watch - sometimes defeat - but champion - extricate stress
    Team - game ticket and round flight ticket - tour stadium - player sign and picture - best memory.


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