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[K-Usher1] 20171129 K1 최은경 수업정리
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7. In order to succeed, it is better to be like others rather than different from

a>b
사람들이 다른 사람들 과 비슷하게 되는 것이 모든 사람들로부터 구별되는 것 보다 성공하기에 더 좋은 방법이다 왜냐하면 사람들은 비슷한 사람들끼리 친밀감을( close friendship)느끼는 경향이 있기 때문이다

Being like others is the better way to succeed than being distinctive from everybody because people tend to feel a sense of close friendship among similar people one another.
b>c
사람들은 자신과 다른 사람들보다는 자신과 비슷한 친한 사람들에게 좋은 정보를 공유한다

people share  good information with friendly similar people rather than different people from them.
c>a
좋은 정보를 얻는 것은 한사람이 성공하는 것을 돕기 때문에, 사람들은 다른사람들과 비슷하게 되어야한다 성공하기 위해서.

Since obtaining good information helps one succeed, people should be like others in order to succeed.
last years, I joined the bicycle riders club. I met jason who is one of the members in the club. We were able to be friend due to similar a matter of interest. Last month, jason has sent the email about the new job opening in the company before he posts it one the official site. Since I was finding a new job, it was good information to me. Now, I am living a busy and hectic life but I think that nowadays I am coming to be successful people thanks to his information.

예시> 친구 > 지난 후 나는 bicycle riders club  > 그곳에서 비슷한 취미를 가진 그를 만남> 서로 친해짐 그런데 지난주 그의 회사에서 new job opening 직업 공석 이 생김
그는 회사사이트에 올리기 전에 나한테 정보공유함  before posts  on the official site. 


다른 것은 안 좋은 방법
> 모든사람들로부터 다른 것은 한사람이 다른사람들과 의사소통하는 것을 어렵게 만듬
의사소통 하는 것이 어렵다는 것은 그가 사회생활에서 적응하는 것이 어렵다는 것을 의미
사회생활에서적응 하지 못한 사람들은 성공하지 못할 가능성이 높음.

 

  8. Some people always follow their dreams even if the dreams are ambitious. Some think we should focus on achieving realistic goals. Which do you agree with?


people being always follow their dreams even if the dreams are unrealistic will be happier in the future rather than people who focused on achieving realistic goals.
when people constantly seek their dream even if it is seemingly unrealistic dreams, they can achieve their dream. although they cannot accomplish their dream, people can achieve a similar dream to their first dream in the future. when they come to draw near their dream, they will be happier than any others.


  9. A challenging and interesting job is better than a job with long vacations.

disagree
a job with long vacations is better than a challenging and interesting jobs because
challenging and interesting jobs make people under great stress. stress is known to be a major factor that keeps people from being healthy. it is more serious than we think. therefore, people should relieve stress by having vacation.
for example, last year, I had a challenging job however this job did not have regular vacations in a year. At that time, I always under great stress from work.
However,  after I converted a challenge job to a job with long vacations at the beginning of this year, I came to be happier than ever before..


long vacations make people relieve stress from a job

  10. It is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than save money for the future.
it is better to save money for the future because every penny counts when it comes to spending money. A thrifty spending habit is indispensable in our lifes, because little drops of water make the mighty oceans. When we don't get used to working on a tight budget, we always be short on cash later. Therefore, it is better to save money for the future. This penny-pinching life style will lead to financial stability and give us piece of mind.
> 예시
2 Spending money on traveling can cause the problem of money in the future. Since traveling force people to spend more money, people have to work to earn money after this traveling. It make people under great stress from work because they did not need to make extra money if they did not travel. This will lead people to suffer from stress about money. Since stress is more serious than we think, people should not spend money on traveling.


  11. People spend too much money on their pets even though there can be other good ways to spend money.

For some people, their pet will be their number-1 priority on any occasion. Since they feel a sense of happiness when their pets seem to be comfortable, they will not save money on their pet in order to care their pets. Moreover, they will think that spending money on their pet is good ways to spend money. Thus I think spending too much money on their pets is a good way to spend money for some people.
 

  12. When people spend a lot of time watching sports on television or following their favorite team, it has negative effects on their lives.


disagree
when people spend a lot of time watching sports on television of following their favorite team, it has negative effects on their lives because in the case of  students, spending a lot of time watching sports or television prevents students from concentrating on their academic courses. Academic courses are the most important thing for student because good grade will help them, get into good university, and eventually get great jobs.  > 12 간지 academic courses.


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