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[K-Usher1] 20171130 K1 최은경 수업정리
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When people spend a lot of time watching sports on television or following their favorite team, it has negative effects on their lives
The standard of beauty cannot be absolute. Beauty is different from each generation, each background, and each preference of individuals. As this standard of beauty can be varied by several factors, an opinion of a certain topic can also be accepted differently. Therefore, This disagreement I make on the topic Spending a lot of time watching sports on television or following their favorite team has negative effects on their lives should be accepted as a result of the various factors put together in the past. Thus, I will provide two factors why I choose to disagree.
To begin with, spending a lot of time watching sports on television gives positive effects on their lives because watching sports on television is the best way to relieve stress. People nowadays are living a busy and hectic life. Thus, they are under great stress. Stress is known to be a major factor that keeps people from being healthy. Therefore, relieving stress by spending time watching sports on television means it has positive effects on their lives. For example, last year, I was living a busy and hectic life for working on the company. I was suffer from working. However, This year, I used to spend a lot of time watching baseball every weekend. Nowadays I can relive stress by watching baseball and I can say that watching baseball on the television have effect on my life. It such a huge influence on me that I believe spending a lot of time watching sports does not have negative effect on people's lives.
In addition, following people's favorite team has positive effects on their lives because people will be happier when people participate in the activities they want to do. These day, people tend to overlook the importance of happiness in their life because they spend too much time to working or studying. However, people take a break and look back why they are working or studying at the first place. Any thing in the world mean nothing if they cannot be happier in their lives. Therefore, following people's favorite team has positive effects on their lives. For instance, when my sister was still alive, my sister always spent too much time studying. At that time, my sister did not look like happily. However, after she realized she had illness, she began to follow her favorite soccer team. Even before her death, she followed her favorite soccer team. Right before her death, she talked to me that following people's favorite time makes people be happier. This example clearly illustrate that following people's favorite team has positive effects on their lives.
As people's beauty disappears, the logic I choose to make for the topic that spending a lot of time watching sports on television or following their favorite team has negative effects on their lives is beginning to end. After the beauty disappears, its remnants were left over. Likewise, the essay left the reasoning of and to bolster my essay. Had it not been for the essay to be supported by this logic, it cannot leave a good impression to others' opinions.
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