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To begin with, creating more jobs for unemployed workers can accumulate country's wealth through employed workers' tax by proclaiming economy law enacted by the leader of the country. As people employ to new companies which are established in the country, employees receive their salary from the company and they should give their country tax at the same time. As this process increases, the country can gain its financial stability.
In addition, employed worker in the new company made by leader’s policy can help active economical circulation stimulate because a lot of money circulates constantly by people’s financial stability more than ever before. As people with affordable money increase, they have a mind which takes a lot of time to spend their money and then, their money will be invested in a lot of economic parts. The country can obtain a lot of economic value from their spending money.