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[K-Usher2] 1106 박수빈라이팅정리..
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1. today university students are more than 20 years ago
-> university students today are more than 20 years ago.
-> there are more university students today than 20 years ago. (비교급. than sv생략 비교대상 today , 20 years ago.) .....??
2. almost of young people
-> most people ( alsmot 는 부사이므로 형용사꾸밈, most 는 형용사이므로 명사꾸밈)
3. most young people have diploma of university and are expertS in their field.
수일치!!
4. this situation makes a person difficult to got hired as a company worker.
-> this situation makes it difficult for a peson to get hired as a company worker.
(It is difficult/ easy for 사람 to 동사 ,, <- to부정사의 의미상주어로 for를사용해서 문장쓰기.)
( make O OC 로 생각해서 makes a person difficult. 라고 썼음....) ???????
5. when a friend of mine became a senior, he had to find a job.
when 절에 시제맞추기 콤마찍기
6. looking for a job relate his major (X)
-> related to his major 구문임!닥암
7. this example shows that people today have their own major and diploma of university so to become successful is difficult.
많은 사람들이 그들의 전공과 대학의 졸업장을 가지고 있어서 성공하기가 더 어렵다.
so 를 but 으로 바꿔야하나요??
8. today there are many field (X)
-> today, there are many fields
many + 복수명사
9. the business is hard to become successful
-> it is hard for the business to become successful. (WHY??????)
10. contemporary society have huge leaps (X)
-> contemporary society has huge leaps (o) 수일치!!!!!
11. it is difficult to become successful in modern society.
-> it is difficult for people to become successful in modern society.
12. I was tried to manage a small online shopping mall.
-> I tried to manage a small online shopping mall. (수동으로쓰다니 바보같음)
13. during 2 years (X)
->for 2 years (o)
during + 구체적 모르는거. during vacation 같은
For + 구체적 시간 (정확히 몇일인지 얼마나의 기간인지 알음)
14. I need to specialized plan. (X) specialized를 동사로쓴줄알고착각함 알고보니 형용사로썼음 동사가없군
-> I need to have a specialized plan.
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