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1. in real 이 아니라 in real life
2. satisfactory -> (품사) satisfaction
3. employs want them have -> employs want them to have
4. and then after she -> and then she (after은 뒷 수식)
5. at the college -> in college (미쳤군)
6. who are eager for job opportunity -> who are eager to get jobs (어감)
7. makes it hard to become -> makes it hard for people to become (닥암인데)
8. how many bills they got in the day -> during the day (전치사)
9. people get easily lose their jobs -> get 지워
10. Even the more serious point is -> even 지워
11. replacement of machines -> replacement of human labor by machines (숙어 check)
12. individuals who prepare for jobs are suffering from qualifying their condition to the requirement
-> indiniduals who are trying to get jobs are suffering from meeting the requirement (미사여구 없애)
13. since she prepared for getting a job -> since she was preparing her resume to get a job
14. she could not get any job and instead of her, the other one get the job since he had perfect qualification for the job.
-> she could not het any job since there was an applicant who had more qualifications.
교훈1 : 새벽에 쓰지 말자 새벽에 쓰지 말자 새벽에 쓰지 말자 새벽에 쓰지 말자 졸릴 때 쓰지 말자
안그러면 연쌤도 새벽에 첨삭해 주신다고 하신다 절대 그러지 말자
교훈2 : 간명하고 간단하게 쓰자 추상적으로 쓰지 말자 미사여구 과감히 빼라 단순화시켜 쓰자
교훈3 : 미친 잔실수는 하지 말자 미친짓도 계속하면 진짜 미친다
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