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1. To begin with, it was much easier to be incorporated in the middle or upper class.(징검다리-이유필요)
->To begin with, it was much easier to get wealth. Wealth is the one of the important indicators for success. We can judge who are successful in their lives by using it.
2.[수일치] There were a relatively little financial gap between people.-> There was a relatively little financial gap between people.
3. [The비교급,the비교급] The greater people's effort, the more they earned money.
-> The greater the people's effort were, the more they earned money.
4. [단어-뉘앙스,품사] in her juvenile -> in her childhood/in her period of adolescence
juvenile: 청소년의 어린애같은 유치한 e.g. juvenile crime/employment, juvenile behavior
(격식 또는 법률) 청소년
5. [표현/시재일치/a] she culminated in a member of regional committee that people want to join and admire.
-> she culminated in being a member of regional committee that people wanted to join and admired.
6. [단어] her effort to success -> her effort to succeed
7. [끝맺음문장] It was an prevailing idea 20 years ago that a hard worker could obtain wealth that is essential for a successful life.
8. [부사절] in 20years ago-> 20 years ago
[적절한 표현] they could feel more successful than now-> their standard of success was much easier to meet
9. the society of 20 years ago -> the society 20 years ago
10.[사역동사] that made people more satisfied with their success-> that made people be more satisfied with their success
11. [a,the/ 자연스러운 표현] the one of the rich in the world-> the one of the riches people in the world
lived the successful life-> lived a successful life(앞에 언급 안된 내용이므로)
12. His successful life cannot be comparable to people's lives so they can feel they do not live a successful life.
-> His successful life cannot be comparable to people's lives so they feel they do not live a successful life.
13. High expectation on the successful life-> highh expectation for one's successful life
14. [formal exp.] As I've mentioned above-> As mentioned above
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