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1. 20 years ago many peole had a less chance of higher education
-> 20 years ago, many people had a less chance of getting higher education
2. lack of competitors -> the less number of competitors // 선생님 lack of 는 사람에게는 쓸 수 없나요?
3. when it comes to entertainer, in the past
-> For example, when it comes to entertainers, in the past,
--> comma(,) 잘 찍자~~~!!!
4. it was easy to be a star performer
-> it was easy for them to be a star performer
5. but nowadays in order to be a celebrity many trainees have to
-> but nowadys, in order to be a celebrity, many trainees have to
6. go through many training courses from their young ages
-> go through many training courses since when they are young.
7. Nevertheless, a small portion of them
-> Nevertheless, only a small portion of them
8. a high possibility of success
-> a high possibility becoming a success in the past[명확하게 한정해주기]
9. today is full of advanced technologies
-> today the world is full of advanced technologies
10. structure engineering -> structural engineering
11. a revolutionary material for construction field
-> a revolutionary material in the construction field
12. Accordingly early developers attained to glory and wealth
-> Accordingly, early developers attained glory and wealth
13. new materials that are superior to the concrete
-> new materials that are superior to concrete
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