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Is the role of university professors to do the research or to educate students?

The given topic ¡°the role of university professors is to do research¡± can also
¡°The role of university professors is to educate students¡±
First, students attend college to learn from their professors. Second,
A=B (A= To begin with, the role of university professors is to educate students because students attend college to learn from their professors.
B-=C (Students want to learn from their professors so that they can prepare for their future careers. ) since/because/ in that
C=A (To prepare for their future, the role of professors is to teach students instead of their research)

Had my professors not helped me with my education, I would not have become the doctor I am. This example/ my life experience proves that the role of professors is to educate students .


Should children take music and art classes?
The given topic ¡°should children take music and art classes¡± can also be¡¦.
Agree
R1) improve their inner minds ¡æ they can experience different mental fields
R2) taking such classes may offer children their future careers ¡æ if they have talent in this field, they should take these courses from a young age
R1) such classes teaches students whether they have talent in this field ¡æ if children are lucky enough to find their talents through these courses, they can hone their skills from an early age.
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B=
C=
Disagree
R1) has no usage in entering university ¡æ music and art classes are for those who want to major in this specific field
R4) waste time ¡æ have no usage in entering university





To begin with, children should not take music and art classes because they are a waste of time. Children will waste time since these courses have no meaning when entering universities. To enter a good university,  children should not take music and art classes. For example, when I was in high school, I decided to not take music and art classes because they hindered me from studying my academic courses. Since the universities I wanted to go to did not require music and art classes, I felt no obligation to take them. I studied really hard and did my best to get into the university I wanted to go to. My friends however, took art and music classes because they thought they would get an easy grade for their academic record. They spent less time on their academic courses such as biology and physics. Unfortunately, they did not do well on their academic courses because they spent too much time singing and drawing pictures. Had my friends decided not to take music and art classes, they would have been able to focus on their studies as I did. This example proves  that children should not take art and music classes.
In addition, children should not take art and music classes because


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