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Although there are no complete consensus toward this given issue, I strongly believe that building swimming pool will be the best choice for the community. In order to delineate my central points, this essay will convey diverse examples and details to support my idea.
First and foremost, swimming pool is acceptable and accessible to everyone. In fact, art museum contains difficult contents so that not many people from community can truly enjoy the value of the art museum. However, swimming pool covers all range of age and sex. Swimming can easily be utilized by community members. For example, -.
Second, we can relieve stress. Stress is known to be a major factor causing many health problems. And one of the most effective ways to relieve stress is to exercise. Swimming is well-known for its active movement and this allows people of community to relieve their stress. For example, -.


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