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ÀÛ¼ºÀÏ : 15-09-03 18:26
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1¹ø. Should junk food be banned in school?
Agree
reason 1: (ÇѱÛ) ¼ºÀå±â¿¡ ÁÁÀºÀ½½Ä ¼·ÃëÇؾßÇÑ´Ù
(¿µ¾î) Teenager should take nutrious food in their growth preiod.
reason 2: (ÇѱÛ) junk foodÀÇ ¼·Ãë´Â ÀÌÈÄ ÀÎü¿¡ ¾ÈÁÁÀº ¿µÇâÀ» ÁÙ¼öÀÖ´Ù
(¿µ¾î) Junk food may give to negative effect on human body.
2¹ø. Should using cell phones be permitted while driving?
Agree (½ÇÁ¦´äÀº disagree ÇÏÁö¸¸ agree °¡ ´äÀÌ ´õ¸¹À½)
reason 1: (ÇѱÛ) ¿îÀüÁß ÀüÈ­ÅëÈ­¸¦ Çϸ鼭 ½Ã°£À» È¿°úÀûÀ¸·Î »ç¿ëÇÒ¼öÀÖ´Ù
(¿µ¾î) By using cell phone during driving, people can use their time more efficiently
reason 2: (ÇѱÛ) cell phone À» »ç¿ëÇϸ鼭 Á¹À½ ¿îÀüÀ» ¹æÁöÇÒ¼öÀÖ´Ù
(¿µ¾î) Also, using cell phone can predict unintentional sleep during driving like listen to music(¼ÖÁ÷È÷ ¾ïÁö..)
3. Do you agree or dis agree with this statement: Teachers should be evaluated by their students.
agree
reason 1: (ÇѱÛ) ¼±»ý´ÔµéÀÌ feedbackÀ»¹ÞÀ¸¸é teaching skillÀ» ¹ßÀü½Ãų¼öÀÖ´Ù
(¿µ¾î) if teachers were evaluated by student, they can get feedback about their teaching skills, and they can improve their teaching skill.
reason 2: (ÇѱÛ) ¿­½ÉÈ÷ °¡¸£Ä¡Áö ¾Ê´Â ¼±»ý´ÔÀÇ ¼ö¸¦ ÁÙÀ̸鼭 ÁÁÀº ÁúÀÇ ±³À°À» Á¦°øÇÒ¼öÀÖ´Ù
(¿µ¾î) evaluating system could reduce lazy teahers, then institution can provide higher quality of education


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