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0. Where the best place to study? (녹음 시에 하도 마음대로 해서 글만이라도 다시...)
To me, the best place to study is library. Some of my friends say studying at home is the most effective way. But I can't agree to that. Because at home, especially in my room, I feel tired and sleepy. In that place, two things seriously disturb my study; my lovely bed and cell phone. But when I go to library, I can see many people studying hard. That condition makes me nervous but positive to me because it stimulates me to study hard too. And silent mood set me to concentrate on my own study. Because of these reasons, the best place to study to me is library. 이렇게 말로 할수 있으면 최소 3점인데ㅜㅜ 빨간 부분 첨삭해줄게 수업때
1. Should junk food be banned in schools?
In my opinion, schools should ban junk food. Because that obstruct students' health. For example, my friend juri really liked junk food when we were high school students. She ate a lot of junk foods like hamburger, coke, etc after every class. When she graduated school, she was really surprised because of her body's change. Juri's weight was increased from about 50kg to 70kg. After that, she declared to all of her friends not to eat junk food anymore . As a result, I believe that junk food should be banned in all schools. 친구 몸무게가 늘어나서 정크푸드가 금지돼야 된다? 흠...,
2. Should using cell phones be permitted while driving?
I would like to mention that using cell phones while driving shouldn't be allowed. If people do not care the sight and looking down their cell phones, they might have a car accident. For example, my neighbor sungyoon experienced that situation. When driving, he thought seeing his cell phone just a moment didn't make any problem. So he checked his e-mail using one hand with the other hand on the handle. At that moment, he manipulated handle to wrong side, and rushed to the park. His car was broken seriously, and he hurt too. Hence, I absolutely think that using cell phones while driving should be banned.
3. Do you agree or disagree with this statement: Teachers should be evaluated by their students.
I agree with the given statement that teachers should be evaluated by their students. Because students are growing both body and mind, teachers should treat students carefully and render good service to them. For instance, my mother, the teacher of middle school, was really surprised because of middle school students' behavior. Because they made new accidents everyday, she was really angry. But she thought teenagers should be treated carefully, so she persevered and gave them more love. Her behavior made her students more cheerful and happier, and then they disseminated things about her. After that, needless to say my mom, other teachers did to their students. Therefore, the idea claims that teachers should be evaluated by their students...(h곱ㅈ두길아라랑!!) <- 이건 어디 사투리인감
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