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작성일 : 16-08-01 12:53
[주니어] [H2] 반상훈 #4 모범답안
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While some people believe that students of all ages should be able to work part-time, I think they should not be able to work part-time. Because first, it is not save for young students to work part-time. Children are immature so they cannot do somewhat dangerous works such as serving coffee. Second, children should study because they have to be competitive. So that children can be great adults.

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정솔아 16-08-01 21:30
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Because first, it is not save for young students to work part-time. save?
competitive?? 차라리 academic courses쓰기.
 
 

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