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I do not agree with the statement that students of all ages should be able to work part-time because they need to concentrate on academic courses which are more important than working part-time for their ages. Also, some ages are too young and taking part-time job is not safe for them. More over, they do not have any knacks or experiences, so efficiency on working will go down and it leads to situation that makes them to be in danger and to disturb working.

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Á¤¼Ö¾Æ 16-08-02 08:41
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more over?
it leads to situationS -- generalization.
 
 

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