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작성일 : 16-07-29 00:13
[주니어] [H2] 윤자현 모범답안 2개
 글쓴이 : 윤자현 (59.♡.34.42)
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I disagree with the statement that government should ban advertisements of plastic surgery. Government doesn't have responsibility to do that rather than have responsibility to protect the freedom of the expression. Besides, if ban on advertisement is purposed on reducing the rate people getting it, it would be ineffective as people would get information through word-of-mouth. In fact, plastic surgeries are not malevolent. If people don't addict to plastic surgery, through it, people can increase in self-esteem of individuals so that live a more confidential and satisfying life. There is no need government to entice people to do that, but should not ban the advertisements.

 I disagree with the statement that famous entertainers and athletes should be granted more privacy than now. Both the groups of people, entertainers and athletes, especially the former, work for getting more popularity and they are paid based on their popularity. The more being exposed to the public, the more chance they become famous. For example, a mumblecore was reported his dilettante life, volunteer works, in public.Then he obtained role in hit movie, entering a stardom. I was also shocked by the usage of media. What I want to clarify is that being secluded would never help celebrities in work. Besides, popularity is transient. If they want to keep the current situation, being famous, they have to continually show them to the crowd rather than isolate themselves.


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125 [주니어] [H2] 김재희 김재희 16-07-29 1522 0
124 [주니어] #8,#10 모범답안 김승민 16-07-29 1526 0
123 [주니어] 스피킹 8 10 모범답안 윤자현 16-07-29 1479 0
122 [주니어] [H2] 홍현기 모범답안 홍현기 16-07-29 1619 0
121 [주니어] #8,#10 김재희 16-07-29 1383 0
120 [주니어] [H2] 반상훈 #8 #10모범답안 반상훈 16-07-29 1371 0
119 [주니어] [H-2반여름특강3차]재우 최재우 16-07-29 1554 0
118 [주니어] [H-1] 김나현 김나현 16-07-29 1404 0
117 [주니어] [H1] 임하은 #1 모범답안 임하은 16-07-29 1524 0
116 [주니어] [H1] 고주희 #1 모범답안 고주희 16-07-29 1570 0
115 [주니어] [H2 김승민 #8,#10 모범답안- 쏠티] 김승민 16-07-29 1571 0
114 [주니어] [H1] 박수빈 #1 모범답안 제출 박수빈 16-07-29 1504 0
113 [주니어] [H2] 윤자현 모범답안 2개 윤자현 16-07-29 1596 0
112 [주니어] [H2] 스피킹 8,10 모범답안 엄진주 16-07-28 1552 0
111 [주니어] [H2] 박세빈 박세빈 16-07-28 1622 0
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