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INTRO: I strongly disagree with the statement that as society progresses, advice from grandparents to children is not as useful as it was in the past.
TS: Children can receive a lot of information from grandparents' real experiences.
SS: Since grandparents are the ones who went through a number of historical events, they can give children more accurate information based on their experiences.
AE: When I was working on my research paper regarding the Korean War, I asked my grandfather who actually fought in the war. He told me his vivid experience including detail information and how he felt about the war. Thanks to him, I did well on my research paper.
CS: This example clearly shows that grandparents' advice is very beneficial for children in modern society.
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