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작성일 : 16-07-18 21:53
[주니어] [H-2반여름특강] 백성열
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Intro: It is better to spend money on travel.

[Body1]
TS: Traveling around the world allows to people to have various experiences.

SS: Lots of experiences help people to solve difficulties.

[Body2]
TS: Vacation helps people to reduce their stress.

SS: Relieving stress leads to healthy life.


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백성열 16-07-20 01:14
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[Body1]
Taking vacation helps people to reduce their stress. It leads to healthier life. Eventually, they have a good condition to work. Good condition allows them to work more efficiently. Therefore, they would have more incomes. For an example, I have a sister who works in the Samsung company. She struggled with her job for spending too much times in working. So she took a vacation for few days. After the vacation, her condition got better. Consequently, she worked hard enough to increase her salary. This example clearly illustrates that spending money on vacation allows people to increase their incomes.
백성열 16-07-20 01:17
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Taking a part time job allows children to have a good experience that helps them to be independent from their parents' helps.
 
 

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349 [주니어] [H-2반 여름특강 3차] 신정우 (1) 신정우 16-07-19 1299 0
348 [주니어] [H-2반 여름특강3차]반상훈 (1) 반상훈 16-07-18 1291 0
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342 [주니어] [H] 박성주 박성주 16-07-15 1292 0
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