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Intro: It is better to spend money on travel.

[Body1]
TS: Traveling around the world allows to people to have various experiences.

SS: Lots of experiences help people to solve difficulties.

[Body2]
TS: Vacation helps people to reduce their stress.

SS: Relieving stress leads to healthy life.


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[Body1]
Taking vacation helps people to reduce their stress. It leads to healthier life. Eventually, they have a good condition to work. Good condition allows them to work more efficiently. Therefore, they would have more incomes. For an example, I have a sister who works in the Samsung company. She struggled with her job for spending too much times in working. So she took a vacation for few days. After the vacation, her condition got better. Consequently, she worked hard enough to increase her salary. This example clearly illustrates that spending money on vacation allows people to increase their incomes.
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Taking a part time job allows children to have a good experience that helps them to be independent from their parents' helps.
 
 

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