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<It is better to spend money on travel and vacation than to save it for future use.>

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Intro: It is better to spend money on travel and vacation than to save it for future use.

TS1: Traveling allows people to gain a lot of experiences.
SS: Experiences make people to choose best ways to solve problems.

TS2: People have to rest well in vacation.
SS: People can live healthier when they rest well.


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TS1: Traveling allows people to gain a lot of experiences.
SS: Experiences make people to choose best ways to solve problems. Solving problems well, people can improve the quality of their lives.

Traveling allows people to gain a lot of experiences. Experiences make people to choose best ways to solve problems. Solving problems well, people can improve the quality of their lives. For example, last year, my older brother spent money to travel with his friends. He gained lots of experiences and learn many things through his short travel. For this reason, people have to spend money on travel.
 
 

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