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Disagree

Body 1
TS1 - Strict teachers can control students more than kind teachers
SS – When teachers cannot control their students, the classes become chaos. Teachers cannot keep going their class.
Body 2
TS2 – Once teachers do well to their students, students cannot distinguish between right and wrong.
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BODY 1
First of all, strict teachers can control their students more than others teachers. Many kind teachers usually play with their students and make students fun.  However, when teachers always do that, many students make light of teachers. However, students cannot make light of strict teachers.


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ÀÓÇÏÀº 16-07-14 00:54
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<Should teachers always be kind and nice to student?>
Disagree

Body 1
TS1 - Strict teachers can control students better than kind teachers.
SS – When teachers cannot control their students, the classes become disorder. Teachers cannot continue their classes due to the disorder. However, strict teachers' classes are not disorder because students get low grades when students tallk each other.
AE - For example,my high school English teacher is very strict. After bell ringing, he locked the door, so other class students cound not go to there class. Also, the teacher's class students, who were not in there,  cound not come to his class.
 
 

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