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*Regardless of circumstances, people should always be polite.
Intro - Agree with the statement that people should always be polite
Body1 - Being impolite make people feel uncomfortable.
- There would be conflict between you and a person who you interact with.
- Being polite could decline the rate of conflict.
- For example, when I was younger,
Body2 - People want to talk to you a lot.
- In Korea, one of the well-known phrases is "Coming words will be beautiful if gone words were beautiful." If you said positive words, you could be given a favorable response.
- For example
Conc - As you can see my reasons, politeness shouldn't be underestimated in every situation
*Should teachers always be kind and nice to students?
Intro - Agree with the statement that teachers should be kind and nice
Body1 - Being kind and nice encourages students to be interested in learning.
- If teacher teaches kindly and nicely, students could learn without kind of repulsion.
Body2 - Both teacher and students could be in a good mood.
- If teaching is kind and nice, there wouldn't be a conflict between teacher and students. In addition, it could make the class cheerful.
Conc - In short, teaching kindly and nicely is better and more beneficial for a class.
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