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Secondly, young people are easily addicted to movies and television. Addiction leads young people to waste their time. Therefore, young people who are addicted to something do not do things that they have to do such as academic courses. In my experience, when I was in year 10, I addicted to movies and television. So, I spent time on watching movies and television rather than spending time on academic courses. Needless to say, I got bad scores on all subjects. Shocked by that, I decided to reduce time for watching television and movies. After, when I graduated high school, I got great grades. This example clearly shows that addiction to watching movies and television deters young people to put their mind in studying.

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Secondly, young people are easily addicted to movies and television. Addiction leads young people to waste their time. Therefore, young people who are addicted to something do not do things that they have to do such as academic courses. In my experience, when I was in year 10, I was addicted to movies and television. So, I spent time on watching movies and television rather than spending time on academic courses. Needless to say, I got bad scores on all subjects. Shocked by that, I decided to reduce time for watching television and movies. After, when I graduated high school, I got great grades. This example clearly shows that addiction to watching movies and television deters young people to put their mind in studying.
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Secondly, young people are easily addicted to movies and television. Addiction leads young people to waste their time. Therefore, young people who are addicted to something do not do things that they have to do such as academic courses. In my experience, when I was in year 10, I was addicted to movies and television. So, I spent time on watching movies and television rather than spending time on academic courses. Needless to say, I got bad scores on all subjects. Shocked by that, I decided to reduce time for watching television and movies. After, when I graduated high school, I got great grades. This example clearly shows that an addiction to watching movies and television deters young people to put their mind in studying.
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Secondly, young people are easily addicted to movies and television. Addiction leads young people to waste their time. Therefore, young people who are addicted to something do not do things that they have to do such as academic courses. In my experience, when I was in year 10, I was addicted to movies and television. So, I spent time on watching movies and television rather than spending time on academic courses. Needless to say, I got bad scores on all subjects. Shocked by that, I decided to reduce time for watching television and movies. After, when I graduated high school, I got great grades. This example clearly shows that an addiction to watching movies and television deters young people to put their minds in studying.
 
 

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