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Topic: Movies and television have negative effects on young people.
Intro: The question as to whether movies and television have bad influences on young people. Some people may believe that movies and programs on television bring more positive effects on young people than those of negative because some programs are educational. However, I strongly assert that most of broadcasting programs are not valuable to lives of young people. There are several reasons why I agree with this statement.
Body 1: To begin with, young people are easily addicted to movies and television. Once young people got addicted to TV broadcast such as soft dramas and comedies, they may not focus on their studies, but instead put their all attention on TV. The deviation from academy can affect students’ school lives in a bad way. For instance, I had a friend, Tim. When he was sixteen year-old, he loved to watch television. He spent much of his time to watch some comedies and television shows. I as a sincere friend of him advised countless times to persuade him that watching television is a waste of his life. However, he did not listen to my true saying. As a result, he couldn’t achieve high score on every subject and as a result, he was drifted apart him from school life. Likewise, films can influence young people to serious addiction and eventually to a stage of chaos in their whole life time.
Body 2: In addition, cruel images have potential to lead young people fierce, some of whom may mimic those films. In most cases, people do not prefer such violent actions. They cannot be a part of society. For instance, my best friend TH watched violent movies and television every day. These kinds of television programs and movies brought negative effects to him. He imitated motions of the violent movies and television programs’ scenes. As a result, his personality changed very aggressive, which were totally different from that of the past. Thus, watching television does give bad effects to young people.
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