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By and large, there are ongoing debates about should student play sports with competition? In reality, lots of people tend to think playing sports with competition is good for students. Because, people think if student play sports with competition student can have more fun. However, I believe that playing sports with competition is not good for students. Because, of two reason conflict and heart.

First and foremost, playing sports with competition can give conflict between students. It could make bad relationship with friends. So, the team atmosphere could get bad. For example, when I was playing sport in School team. I always played sports with competition. But, when our school got lost I always said something to my friend because when I play sports I have a strong competition mind. Because of that I and my friend relationship got broke. So, this example clearly shows that playing sports with competition is bad.










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Title: computer games is not good for student
body1: disrupt studying->bad grade
body2: bad relationship with parent-> cause of computer

There are constant debates about playing computer is not good for student. In reality a majority of people tend to think playing computer game is good for student. However, I believe that playing game is not good for student. Because of two reason disrupt and relationship with parents.

First and foremost, playing computer game can disrupt student studying. Now day, studying is one of the important things for student. If student playing computer game and do not study they could get bad grade at school. For example, when I was young I always played games no matter what. Cause of that i got a bad grade every day. But, now no matter what I am trying to not play game and I am trying to study. When i changed my to study, I felt that studying is one of most import thing to student.


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