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작성일 : 16-08-03 23:32
[주니어] [S2 강수민] 경쟁
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Topic; Students should play sport with competition.
There are constant debates about whether students’ should play sport with competition or not. In reality, a majority of people tends to think that competition is not necessary for students’ when they play sports because the relationship between team members could be break down and their stress could be heap. However, I strongly believe that students should play sport with competition because they could learn the importance of teamwork and they could success in anytime when they need to have competition with other.
 First and foremost, playing sports makes students’ to learn the significance of cooperation. Cooperation is the most important skill for students because it allows students to learn how to respect others. For example, I joined a soccer club. By joining soccer club I was able to learn not only playing soccer but also communication. This experience allowed me how to esteem my teammates. My example clearly shows that why playing sports makes students to learn the importance of teamwork.


Topic; Playing computer games is not good for student.
There have been constant debates about whether playing computer games is not good for students or not. In reality, a majority of people tends to think that playing computer games is not bad for students because they could relieve their stress received from academic courses. However, I strongly believe that playing computer games is not good for students because students could be addicted and communication with other people will reduce.
 First and foremost, playing computer games can lead students in to addiction. Students’ would be addicted in computer games unsuspectingly. While they play games, they lose one’s reckoning of time, and play games continuously. So on, they will show anxiety disorder when they stop playing games. As a result, this will end up in game addiction. For example, my friend enjoyed playing computer games, everywhere he went he was always playing games. This led him to become a game addict, which made him having psychology consultation. This example clearly shows that playing computer games can lead in to addiction.


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