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body 1: close relationship
body 2: stress

There are constant debates whether parents should spend more time with their children by learning or by playing. In reality, a majority of people tend to think that parents should spend more time with their children by learning. However, I believe that spending time with their children by playing is better for parents because of two reasons.

First and foremost, parents can build close relationship with their children by playing. Nowadays, building close relationship with children is the most important thing for parents. It also allows parents to reduce conflict between them and their children. For example, when I was young, my parents always played with me every weekend. I and my parents could build very close relationship by it and it also allowed us to have less conflict. This clearly shows that playing with children provides close relationship to parents


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