she always communicates  with her family.

These means can let them understand or learn more quickly about various subjects such as history. 이건 무슨문장인지 뜻을 모르겠음

For example, my friend who is in high school, had difficulty in memorizing about historical figures and how their ancient people's life style was
-->For example, my friend who is in high school, has difficulty in memorizing historical figures and how their ancient people's life style were (사실 이문장도 뜻을 잘 모르겠음)

 showed about 'Sado', which was a movie that told about how people lived in that period and how the prince had died.
-->  showed a movie about'Sado', which told about how people lived in that period and how the prince had died. (이것도 뜻이해 잘안됨 그리고 example이 너무 구체적임)

After watching this movie, she started
--> she 어디서 갑툭튀?friend가 여자라고 언급 안함.

In addition, watching television and movies with parents, young people can get closer to their parents.
--> In addition,young people can get closer to their parents by watching television and movies together. (더깔끔함)

all of the people--> everyone

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친구 여자 갑툭튀는 가능할것으로 보입니다

그렇습니다

which means it can let them understand or learn more quickly~로 가야될듯

my friend who is in highschool, -> my friend who is in highschool had a difficulty of~ 오는게나은거같음

my friend who is in high school had difficulty of ~ 가 낫지않음?

told 은 about 이랑 함께 쓸수 없을것 같은데요
told how people lived in that period

약간 discuss about 느낌..?

my history teacher showed about 'Sado'
my history teacher showed us 'Sado'

a movie that told about how people lived in that period and how the prince had died.
a movie that deals with how people lived in that period and how the prince had died.

she always communicate with her family.
she always communicates with her family.

이렇게 바꾸면 좋을것 같아~

The question as to whether movies and television have negative effects on young people or not has been a constant debate in the field of education. In reality, majority of students think movies and television have negative effects on young people. However, I believe that movies and television have positive effects on young people because of several reasons.
To begin with, by watching television and movies, young people can gain knowledge. A lot of knowledge from this can be connected to various aspects. These means can let them understand or learn more quickly about various subjects such as history. For example, my friend who is in high school has a difficulty of memorizing about historical figures and how their ancient people's life style was. As we were learning about 'Josean', my history teacher showed us 'Sado', which was a movie that deals with how people lived in that period and how the prince had died. After watching this movie, she started to find other series of 'Josean' from TV dramas or TV shows. Even though she cannot learn totally about kings of 'Josean' dynasty, she was able to learn about dynasty's culture, wars, and life style. Therefore, from her experience, she was able to enhance her knowledge about one part of history, which was the part she had to study for an exam.
In addition, young people can get closer to their parents by watching television and movies together. Forming good relationship with their parents, children can also learn how to form good relationship with other people. For example, my friend Joy is a girl who has good relationship with almost everyone in our school. She can do this because she always communicates with her family. She said her family members always talk about the story of the movies and share their opinions each other after the movie finished. This example shows that the good advantage of watching movies and television.

The question as to whether movies and television programs have negative effects on young people or not has been a constant debate in the field of education. In reality, majority of the people think movies and televisions have negative effects on young people. However, I believe that movies and televisions have positive effects on young people because of several reasons.

To begin with, young people can learn new knowledge easily by watching televisions and movies. A lot of information from these media can be connected to various areas of education. These means can help students understand and learn various subjects more quickly such as history. For example, my friend has a difficulty of memorizing about historical figures and ancient lifestyles in high school. As we were learning about 'Josean', my history teacher showed us 'Sado', which was a movie that deals with how people lived in that period and how the prince had died. After watching this movie, she started to find other series of 'Joseon' movie from TV dramas or TV shows. Even though she could not learn totally about kings of 'Joseon' dynasty, she was able to learn about its culture, wars, and lifestyle. Therefore, from her experience, she was able to enhance her knowledge about one part of history, which was the part she had to study for an exam.

In addition, young people can get closer to their parents by watching televisions and movies together. By forming good relationship with their parents, children also can learn how to form good relationship with other people. For example, my friend Joy is a girl who has good relationship with almost everyone in our school. She could make this happen because she always communicated with her family. She said that her family members always talk about the story and share their opinions about it after the movie. This example shows advantages of watching movies and television.