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Topic:Technology improves the environment rather than destroying the environment.

Developed technology makes people’s life comfortable. Some people argue that developed technology improves the environment. However, I strongly argue that technology destroy the environment for several reasons. First, using land destroy our resources and it is also dangerous to people. In addition, people could save endangered animals and the land if people do not devastate environment because food chain will not work.

To begin with, various industries can cause environmental problems as the manufacturing process can destroys nature. Companies contribute to both deforestation and pollution. For instance, Brazil lost 70% of their forests because Brazil wanted to develop their technology and the country. Therefore, they needed more land to buildings and companies. However, during this kind of process, it causes a lot of problems to humans and also endangered animals. As a result, people should not use land for their purpose.

In addition, a great number of species have food chain which makes species to coexistence or predators kill them some animals which are weaker than predators. This is because food chain maintains people to alive. For example, plankton lives on the ocean and it is also main staple food of fish. However, ducks eat fish to alive. People consume the duck because it is tasty and has a lot of nutrition. If the fish or duck became extinct, humans will also extinct. Therefore, people have to take care about endangered animals.

To conclude, people destroy the resources and nature because they want to build their buildings and make products. In addition, it has a negative effect to humans who want to get benefits from this. Thus, people should save environment if they want to improve technology.


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