로그인


remember
토플학원 어셔 학사일정
게시판 > board

 
작성일 : 16-07-29 10:52
[주니어] 류T 통합형 학생 예시답안
 글쓴이 : 류형진 (61.♡.149.228)
조회 : 1,509   추천 : 1  
In the given set of materials, the reading passage and the lecture deal with coal to debate whether its usage is detrimental to humanity or not. The reading passage is providing three pieces of evidence to prove its point, whereas the lecturer argues against it by providing three compelling rebuttals.

 First and foremost, the professor points out that coal has low energy efficiency compared to that of other fossil fuels. Since it has only 10 percent of energy efficiency, coal is not sufficient for growing population. As more energy is needed from growing population, it is better to use other natural gases even though they are more expensive. This challenges the reading passage's claim that coal has a plenty of reserves and, thus, is less expensive than the other natural gases.

 Moreover, the speaker argues that using coal pollutes the environment, especially the water system. When using the coal, coal must be washed away with a toxic chemical. During this process, coal sludge is formed and this must be properly disposed. However, this is simply injected to the underground mines. This endangers both the underground and the surface water. The speaker's claim casts doubt on the reading passage's point that people are knowledgeable about coal usages, especially in producing electricity.

 Last but not least, the lecturer asserts that using coal cause air pollution. It emits carbon monoxide which is harmful to humans. This gas causes problems in people's central nervous systems and hearts. It also has severe effects on fetuses. This is because the technology is yet well developed to prevent the leakage of coal plants. This idea contradicts the claim made in the reading saying coal can be utilized in various fields.


글자수: 748.5자

정주진 16-07-29 17:33
 59.♡.34.42  
감사합니다
이준석 16-07-31 17:04
 121.♡.78.197  
와우 바디파트까지만 해도 나랑 100자 정도 차이가 나는군.
 
 

Total 487
번호 제   목 글쓴이 날짜 조회 추천
397 [주니어] 류T 통합형 학생 예시답안 (2) 류형진 16-07-29 1510 1
396 [주니어] [류T 명예의 전당] E 채윤주 채윤주 16-07-28 1387 0
395 [주니어] [류T 명예의 전당 예헷] H2 김재희 김재희 16-07-26 1471 0
394 [주니어] [H-2반여름특강3차]최재우 최재우 16-07-26 1275 0
393 [주니어] [H-2 여름특강 3차] 안수연 안수연 16-07-25 1337 0
392 [주니어] [H-2반 여름특강3차] 전주한 전주한 16-07-25 1334 0
391 [주니어] [류T 명예의 전당] [H-2반 여름특강 3차] 홍현기 홍현기 16-07-25 1499 1
390 [주니어] [류T 명예의전당 H2반 김승민] Team work is better than workin… 김승민 16-07-25 1449 0
389 [주니어] [H-2반 여름특강3차] 전주한 전주한 16-07-21 1337 0
388 [주니어] H1 김민기 김민기 16-07-21 1316 0
387 [주니어] [류T 명예의전당]히힛 칭찬받았다 넘나 조은것 이소현 16-07-21 1449 0
386 [주니어] [H-2반 여름특강3차]전주한 전주한 16-07-21 1316 0
385 [주니어] [H-2반 여름특강 3차] 홍현기 홍현기 16-07-21 1387 0
384 [주니어] [H-2 여름특강] 박성주 박성주 16-07-21 1352 0
383 [주니어] [H-2 여름특강 3차] 안수연 안수연 16-07-21 1394 0
 1  2  3  4  5  6  7  8  9  10    
select * from g4_write_wr_brain where wr_is_comment = 0 order by wr_num, wr_reply limit 90, 15

  • 완전초보1반
  • 완전초보2반
  • intermediate반
  • K-USHER1반
  • K-USHER2반
  • 실전반