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Question: Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should bas their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field. 
[Intro] 
싸움: The question as to whether young students should choose a field of study in accordance with their talents or interests or the availability of jobs in that field has been a constant debate in the field of education. 
대다수의 의견: Between two crucial values of being pragmatic or idealistic in their career choice, in reality, a majority of students tend to choose a field of study that is more likely to increase their chance to get a job with a decent salary and stability. 
나의 의견 및 근거: However, I believe that it is better for college students to choose their major based on their preference because individuals have diverse talents and passions. 
[Conclusion] 
요약: In short, students should be advised to take their interests or talents into consideration when they choose their major field of study in the upper level. 
상대방에 대한 인정 /그치만 내가 짱임.: Though vocational concerns should be weighted to a certain degree, we should not undermine the fact that those who made idealistic choices largely contributed to improving the quality of life of mankind.
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