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Intro: I agree that parents should encourage their children to take a part-time job.
TS1: Children can have new experiences through a part-time job.
ES1: Experience is a invaluable asset that is only possible to gain by working a part time job. This is impossible to gain by reading books.
TS2: Through a part-time job, children can have a memory about their difficulties in a part time job.
ES:Through children have a memory of difficulties in a part time job. This hardships are a feedback for children for their future jobs and careers.


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