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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People spend too much money on their pets even though there can be other good ways to spend money.
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I agree with the statement that people should spend their money on their pets.
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TS: Pets help people to relieve stress.
SS: Relieving stress makes people to concentrate on their studying or working. Also relieving stress helps people to cure health problem.
AE: For example, a patient was suffering from the depression. Feeling lonely, he decided to own the pet such as dog or cat. After owing the dog, his depression was completely cured because of his love for his dog. This example shows that owing pet and spending money on them is one of the best ways to spending money.
CS: Therefore, people should spend their money on their pet.
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