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TS: Instead of spending too much money on their pets, it is better to spend money on traveling.
ES: Traveling allows people to relieve their stress. Relieving stress is the most important thing for workers, because it leads to make people enjoy their lives.
SS: From my own experience, originally I spent most of my money on my pet. But it did not help me to take me out from working. But my friend advised me to travel to Europe, and this really helped me to release my work stress. Now I often spend my money on traveling rather than spending money on my pet, and this really helps me to enjoy my life.
CS: This example clearly shows that spending money on traveling is better than spending money on my pets.
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