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Parents should encourage their children to take part-time job.
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Parents should encourage their children to take part-time job. And I agree with this statement for the following reasons.
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TS: Chilldren can have more experience by having a part-time job.
ES: Children can choose their job more carefully.
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TS: Children can learn responsibility.
ES: By earning money, children will recognize how their money is important.
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