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Parent should encourage their children to take a part-time job.
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I agree that parents should encourage their children to take a part-time job for following reasons.
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First of all, by encouraging their children to take a part-time job, children can have a new experience.
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Having a new experience is the most invaluable asset for children because it cannot ever be found by just reading the books.
Body 2
[TS]
Furthermore, taking a part-time job makes children independent.
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Being an independent person is an important progress for children which allows them to prepare and practice for their job.
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