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정다솜 (59.♡.34.42)
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*Intro: I strongly believe that parents should encourage their children to take a part-time job.
*Body 1
T.S: First, children can understand parents.
E.S: By taking a part time job, they realize how parents work hard to earn money and do not waste a money.
*Body 2
T.S: Second, they can get an achievement about themselves.
E.S: The achievement makes them get a high self esteem and satisfaction about their task or goal.
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