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7/18숙제(다른 곳에 올려서 검사 못 받았던 숙제)
Intro: People should spend their money on travelling and vacation than to save it for future use.
TS1: Vacation allows people to live better lives by providing them a time to relieve their stresses.
ES1: People can easily get exhausted by grueling schedules. Therefore, sometimes people need to break away from routines of daily lives by travelling to another cities.
TS2: Travelling endows people an opportunities to learn differently such as learn by themselves instead of just reading a books.
ES2: Certain topics such as historical facts what people have learned when they visit the actual historical sites will be retained in the memory longer.
7/19 숙제
Vacation allows people to live better lives by providing them a time to relieve their stresses. During lives, people encounter various works to do and duties to fulfill. This is why people need to have certain times to rest for a bit which can be a breaking away from routine of daily lives such as travelling to another places. There are considerable numbers of things what people can get from travelling. People can take care of their mental health by departing from their stressed daily lives. Moreover, people can take some time off to get recharged for the efficiency of their works.
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