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- I strongly disagree with the statement that children should be encouraged to take a part time job for several reasons.
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Topic Sentence: Taking part time job brings about students' safety issue.
Explanatory Sentence: It is dangerous for children because part time job usually ends up at late night.
Topic Sentence: Not having enough time, children would not be able to accomplish the things that they can achieve when they are young.
Explanatory Sentence: Losing an opportunity to accomplish the things that they are allowed to do when they are young, it would be a huge discourage for children.
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