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<Should parents encourage their children to take a part-time job?>
Intro : I agree with the statement that parents should encourage their children to take a part-time job.
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TS : When children take a part-time job they can get new experience.
ES : Experience is an invaluable asset because experience could not have learned from books.
Body 2
TS : Taking a par-time job makes to realize the valuable of money.
ES : Realizing of the value of money helps not to waste their money.
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