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-Parents should encourage their children to take a part-time job.-
Intro:
Parents should not encourage their children to take a part-time job in my opinion.
Body 1:
Children's part-time job can cause the wasting of opportunities which they can utilize.
Those opportunities give them memories, invaluable experiences, and even direction for their future.
Body 2:
Early access of working in real life gives children to get stress.
Stresses are a typical cause of unhealthy status, which affects negatively on their academic courses, one of the main jobs of student.
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