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Topic: Parents should encourage their children to take a part time job
Intro: I agree with the opinion parents should encourage their children to take a part time job.
BodyI(TS): Children can practice how to control money.
BodyI(ES): In the future children will get their own jobs, they own their own money. through the part time job children can learn how to use money and achieve the abilities to take care of financial problems.
BodyII(TS): Children can learn ways of communication.
BodyII(ES): In a part time job it is not done by one self. With a partner children can learn how to communicate with other people and also achieve teamwork.
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